Exodus, 20:14
Blue pencil and red pen, fix what you can,
But words are like ball bearings or beach sand:
Once out of the pouch, you can’t hold them all.
Something always slips through, trips up the plan.
Most typos are harmless. We understand
What’s meant. Others spring from the devil.
The 1631 King James has this
Howler: “thou shalt commit adultery.”
Really, now. It would become a headache
For a lot of guys, who would rather miss
Out on an affair to stay secretly
Home with their wives. Even if a mistake
By the Word of the law, they would be blessed,
And edit the Book out of sheer laziness.
Publisher’s Announcement
Calculated to reflect the sixty minutes in an hour of heightened imaginative contemplation, the poems in Ernest Hilbert’s first book, Sixty Sonnets, contain memories of violence, historical episodes, humorous reflections, quiet despair, violent discord, public outrage, and private nightmares. A cast of fugitive characters share their desperate lives—failed novelists, forgotten literary critics, cruel husbands, puzzled historians, armed robbers, jobless alcoholics, exasperated girlfriends, high school dropouts, drowned children, and defeated boxers. These characters populate love poems (“My love, we know how species run extinct”), satires (“The way of the human variety, / Not even happy just being happy”), elegies (The cold edge of the world closed on you, kissed / You shut”), and songs of sorrow (“Seasons start slowly. They end that way too”). The original rhyme scheme devised for this sequence—ABCABCDEFDEFGG—allows the author to dust off of the Italian “little song” and Americanize the Elizabethan love poem for the twenty-first century. Speaking at times in propria persona (“We’ll head out, you and me, have a pint”), at times in the voice of both male and female characters (“I’m sorry I left you that day at MoMA”), at times across historical gulfs (“Caesar and Charlemagne, Curie, Capone”), Sixty Sonnets marshals both trivia and tragedy to tell stories of modern America, at last achieving a hard-won sense of careful optimism, observing “the last, noble pull of old ways restored, / Valued and unwanted, admired and ignored.”
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